Tuesday, May 10, 2011

One Hundred Pages

I think I'm now in what they call the "home stretch" of the script. With only a third left to go, I'm back on track for a met deadline...! Here's a snippet:

PAGE ONE HUNDRED

Panel One: Another man is knocked aside by the sweep of a clawed hand. The Sioux are regrouping now however, and are forming a counter attack.

Panel Two: A Sioux spear plunges deep into the back shoulder of the creature. The beast grimaces in pain.

Panel Three: It spins around, snapping the spear off and slapping the warrior out of the way.

Panel Four: Another warrior leaps onto the BEAST's back. He is swinging an axe down at the creature.

Panel Five: The creature stumbles, but manages to deflect the axe. The warrior leaps clear.


How's that for some action?

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